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(教师)雅思大作文强化训练
第一部分 大作文概述
1.格式注意事项
(1)不用写题目。
(2)注意分段。
(3)左右留一寸的空间。
传统方法:每段首行向右移两个字的位置。
现代方法:段落之间留一行控分段。
只使用一种方向,不要同时使用。建议用现代式,看起来更舒服,但千万不能忘了空行。
(4)不要分词。
(5)大概10-12个词一行。
2.评分标准
(1)TR-Task response
(2)CC-Coherence and Cohesion
(3)LR-Lexical resource
(4)GRA-Grammatical range and accuracy
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3.大作文写作步骤
审题——确立文章框架和大纲——选定模板——进行填空——检查修改
(1)审题
第一步是通读
第二步是细读
(2)列提纲
(3)选定模板
四段式:3773
五段式:35553
(4)填空
一、举实例论证。
二、用一些研究、调查、发现、科学家及权威人士的观点或组织机构的研究结果加以论证,并引用数据作为支撑。此论证方法的好处就是比较权威客观,更有说服力。
三、通过比较和对比方式来论证,这样两个事物、行为或者观点的利弊就非常明显。
四、通过假设进行正反论述。
五、换种说法,换而言之。
第二部分 重点写作题材逐项击破
1.教育类 例1
(1)例文修改
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(2)佳作赏析
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例2
(1)例文修改
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(2)佳作赏析
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(3)写作练习
Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Some people suggest that high school graduate students should go to university to have higher education, but others encourage students to find jobs to meet the needs of the society.Discu both views and give your opinion.Some people suggest that high school graduate students should go to university to have higher education, but others encourage students to find jobs to meet the needs of the society.Discu both views and give your opinion.2.环境类 例1
(1)例文修改
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(2)范文赏析
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例2
(1)例文修改
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(2)佳作赏析
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(3)写作练习
Some argue that companies and private individuals, not government, should pay the bill of pollution clean up.To what extend you agree or disagree?
3.社会
(3)写作练习
A.Some people believe that charity organizations should give aid to those in great needs no matter where they live.However, other people think that charity organizations should concentrate on helping people who live in their own country.Discu both views and give 16 / 17
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your opinion.(社会 慈善)
B.Nowadays, the gap between the rich and the poor is increasing.Discu the causes of and the solutions to the problem.(社会)
D.Some people think it is more important for government to spend public money on promoting healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illne than to spend it on the treatment of people who are already ill.To what extend do you agree or disagree?
E.Using modern technology to work at home benefits money only, but not employers.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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