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Part one-------Eay
Our Spring Outing
Last week our cla decided to have a spring outing in order to enjoy ourselves together with the nature.After an enthusiastic discuion we finally made up our minds to go mountain hiking instead of going to an amusement park or boating.With a great enthusiasm and completed backpacks, we arrived at our destination and set about hiking.Thanks to the wonderful sunshine we all had a great mood.While we were climbing the mountain, we were all revel in the view of the mountain after a sudden glimpse.At that moment we even wished to blends ourselves with the nature.But good time doesn’t last long.As soon as we reached the top of the mountain and were planning to have a picnic as well, we were shocked by the amount of garbage which been littered nearly every corner of the summit.There were all kinds of litters including bottles, plastic bags and so on.Without too much consideration, we started to pick up all those litter spontaneously.After several hours hard working, we cleaned up the ground to let it became as neat as it should be.Afterwards, we threw the rubbish into the recyclable bin and the unrecyclable bin respectively.Kept on doing the same movement seemed to be very bored and tired, but all of us finished the whole work with smiles on our faces.Yes, that was because we were glory in our work and was definitely glad to participate in environmental protection career.After all, there is no substitute for our earth.It’s all we’ve got to live on, isn’t it?
Part two-------Introspection
这次在写二稿的时候要比写一稿的时候成熟很多，无论是思维还是写作手法我认为在老师讲评完了之后我都有了比较大的改变。不再是什么细节都往上面写，而是紧紧抓住每一幅图片的要点以及支撑要点存在的细节。一开始在写一稿的时候我不仅有一个要点没有特别的点明，而且通篇下来也有几处的时态错误问题，所以分数并非很高。但是，在之后写这篇的时候，我认为我可以比较正确的抓住图片的要点并加以合理的描写以便于突出情节的发展。好的输入决定好的输出，所以我认为我以后还是要多练习片段写作，以及累积各种词汇短语。
