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2010上海中考英语作文题:I'm proud of myself 上海中考英语作文题:I'm proud of myself1、What kind of person are you?
2、What makes you proud of yourself(Give an example/examples)
3、Why are you proud of yourself? 要求：至少60字 范文：
I am a boy of le confidence.I always hate running.But as we all know, the students of Grade nine have to take part in the sports exam.At that moment, I just wanted to give up.but my parents encouraged me: “Impoible is nothing, ” “you could challenge yourself!” so with the encouragement of them，,I tried my best to run and insisted on running.When I got to the finishing line ,I felt proud of myself,though I didn‟t get the good mark, I knew ,I won.I created a miracle for myself and I was so proud of myself!
2009年上海中考英语作文试题评析
(以“I want to do something for my school（我想为学校做一件事）” 为题写—篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
学生习作1 I want to make school clean.You may think it is very simple.But I don't think so.Our teacher said, “School is your home, you should keep it clean.”But I have never done anything to make school clean.For example, I have never told my clamate to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground.I also threw the rubbish on the ground.So I want to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me.During this summer holiday, I will go to school to make school clean.Of course, I will do it with my clamates.We will make school clean every weekends next term as well.Now, do you think it is simple? 评析
此文分三层，先提出自己的观点，然后写出自己怎么做的，最后写了我可以让我的学校变得干净让每个人宽恕我，结尾紧扣全文，写出我会怎么做。
全文立意新颖，区别于传统的作文，有自己的生活背景，写出了从我原来是怎么做到现在的转变过程，没有重大的语法错误，是一篇值得参考的好文章。
中考作文给力预测
假期利弊★范文2008年政府取消了五一黄金周（May golden week），但是，最近有些人又提出要恢复7天的长假。同学们也在校园网的自由论坛上展开了激烈的讨论。请你选用下面表格所提供的信息，写一篇短文，谈谈恢复长假的假期利弊
★ 范文
2008年政府取消了“五一”黄金周（“May golden week”），但是，最近有些人又提出要恢复7天的长假。同学们也在校园网的“自由论坛”上展开了激烈的讨论。请你选用下面表格所提供的信息，写一篇短文，谈谈恢复长假的利与弊，并简述你的观点，给出一至两条理由。
AdvantagesDisadvantages
have a good rest
spend more time …with …
…cause a lot of trouble…
be crowded everywhere…
…
In 2008，„May golden week‟ was canceled，but this year people have discued the problem whether we should renew „May golden week‟ or not.Some people think the 7-day holiday is very important.Firstly，we could have a good rest and refresh ourselves after several months of hard work.Secondly，we could spend more time staying with our family.Thirdly，we will be able to use the one-week vacation to travel to some farther places such as foreign countries.However，other people hold the opposite view.They think it causes a lot of problems.It may lead to traffic jam and visitors will not enjoy themselves if the travelling spots are over-crowded.As a student，I prefer a 7-day holiday.Not only can I sleep well and do exercise，but also I can read some interesting books.How I wish a 7-Day holiday would come soon and we will have a 7-day holiday then！
公共规则
★ 范文
It‟s not allowed to throw litter anywhere in the public places.Everyone should obey the rules.Speaking loudly in the reading room is seemed to be very rude.Remember not to do anything that might make other people uncomfortable.We should stand in line when we are waitiing for the bus.Try hard to give up the bad habits and develop good ones.We should respect the senior people and talk to them politely.Especially，we should give our seat to old people or women with babies on the bus.I think helping others can not only make us happy but also help us get more experience in life.Please cherish the public property.使用手机
★ 范文
关于中学生使用手机
赞成意见：1.现在是信息社会，手机是最快的信息交流的工具之一。2.应充分利用好手机。如偶遇突发事故，可立即拨打手机求助。3.可在每天学习之余利用手机游戏放松一下自己。4.只要正确使用好手机，紧跟时间并无过错，追求时尚可以理解，但学习是首要任务。
反对意见：1.学校已提供了公共电话，因此手机并不能带来更多的方便，而且花费较多。2.若课堂接听手机会影响上课。3.学生玩手机游戏或接发短信，将无法集中精力学习。
Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students.Some think it is good for students to bring a mobile phone.But some people do not think so.They think it is bad for students to bring a mobile phone.Because the students will use mobile phones to play games，sent text meages，watch movies，etc which will do harm to their study.And if a mobile phone ring in the cla，the teacher and students would be disturbed.In my opinion，we can bring mobile phones to school.As we know，the 21st century is a modern age and full of information.A mobile phone is one of the quickest tools for us to exchange information.The mobile phone is a fashionable and useful invention，so we ought to make the best use of it.Suppose there‟s a sudden accident，it is more convenient for us to dial for help immediately.There‟re also some games in the mobile phone.We can relax ourselves by playing them when we‟re tired of our studies.In my opinion，it‟s not wrong to follow the fashion，but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way and do not disturbed others.网络游戏
★ 范文
沉迷网络游戏
题目：李小虎沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮他呢？
请用下面所给的提示词写一篇短文。
提示词： give up concentrate on be（become）interested in
Li Xiaohu spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others.As a good/close friend of his，I must do something to help him.First，I think it‟s very important for him to learn leons well.He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games.Secondly，I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health，especially for his eyes.So he must give it up.I can play more sports with him after school.Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games.And then I„ll ask him to concentrate more on his study.Of course，I will try my best to help him with all his subjects.I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying.At the same time，I‟ll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him，too.If I try these，I’m sure he will make great progre soon.突发事件问题是中考书面表达的热点话题，从非典到雪灾，从地震到甲型HINI流感病例（A/HINIflucases），近几年时事热点都频频出现在各地中考试卷中，因此必须重视。但这类文章的写作有一定的难度，掌握基本句式和写作
突发事件问题是中考书面表达的热点话题，从非典到雪灾，从地震到甲型HINI流感病例（A/HINI flu cases），近几年时事热点都频频出现在各地中考试卷中，因此必须重视。但这类文章的写作有一定的难度，掌握基本句式和写作技巧非常必要。
典型例句：
1.one +of + 形容词最高级+ 名词复数
One of the biggest events in China in 2008 is that the earthquake happened in
WenChuan.2.It“s our duty to do sth
It‟s our duty to help them.3.As….as poible
We should help them as much as poible.4.here be…。.Here are lots of things we can do.5.We should keep calm instead of being afraid.我们要保持冷静而不能害怕。
6.make +sb+ 形容词
It makes many people homele.7.too … to= so … that
They are too young to look after themselves
例文：
1、汶川大地震
2008年5月12日，四川省汶川地区发生了罕见的大地震，那里的人们痛失亲人和家园。全国人民众志成城，抗震救灾。作为一名中学生，请你谈谈你的做法和感受。
要求：文章语言流畅，逻辑清晰，用词准确，80—100字左右;
词汇参考：地震earthquake，悲痛sorrow，受到感动be deeply moved，安慰comfort，重建rebuild，自愿做某事volunteer to do sth
参考范文：
On May 12th，a big earthquake happened in Wenchun，Sichuan.Many people lost their relatives and their homes.All the Chinese people feel quite sorrow.A lot of people volunteer to help them.Some people raise money for them，some people buy something for them，some people go there to comfort the sad children.Thousands of soldiers help them to save their relatives and rebuild their homes Even foreign friends also give them a hand.I‟m deeply moved by these people.So I‟ll use my pocket money to buy some food and school things for the children there.I think all of us should try our best to help them to get out of the trouble together.2、雪灾
2008年春节期间，我国大部分地区遭受雪灾，特别是南方，室几十年未遇。公路、铁路、机场都被迫关闭，电网瘫痪，数百万人不能回家过年。部分山区人民生活异常困难，在各级政府的带领下，人民群众、解放军战士英勇抗击雪灾，涌现出大批可歌可泣的英雄事迹。作为一名中学生，你有何感想？有何打算？能不能改变这种状态？
As we know，our country suffered heavy snow last Spring Festival.Everything was covered with heavy snow.It made the buses，trains and planes stop.Millions of people couldn”t go home.Many people suffered trouble.There was no food，water or light in some places.Our government called on people to fight against heavy snow.As a student，I think we should learn from those heroes.We must study hard at school.We should learn all kinds of knowledge to make our motherland stronger，better and richer.3.甲型HINI流感
从电视上看到美国正流行甲型HINI流感（A/HINI flu），部分学校停课你为你正在美国上学的笔友Mike的健康与安全担心。请立即给他写一封email询问他的情况，并给他提出防护建议。
要点：
一、询问
1.他的健康状况;
2.他们学校有无甲型HINI流感病例（A/HINI flu cases）;
3.他们是否还上学。
二、建议
1.尽量呆在家里，少去人多的地方;
2.勤洗手;讲卫生
3.多开窗，保持空气新鲜;
4.多吃水果蔬菜。
Dear Mike，From the TV I know many A/HINI I flu cases are reported recently in the United States and many schools are closed as a result.I‟m so worried about you.Are you alright？ Are there any A/HINI flu cases in your school？ Do you still have to school everyday？To stay away from the disease，you‟d better stay at home as much as poible and not go to places where there are many people.Wash your hands more often to keep them clean;Open the window to have more fresh air in the room;And eat more fruit and vegetable to keep yourself fit and strong.So far the disease is not so deadly as it seems to be.Do be at ease！Take care and you‟ll be OK.Yours truly，Li Hua
