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【参考范文一】
The Cherry Avenue
If I'm the guide of my foreign friend's visit to ourcampus, I will choose the Cherry Avenue as our firstdestination.As the name implies, the Cherry Avenue is linedwith hundreds of neatly-placed cherry bloomtrees.It is about 200 meters long and a major scenicspot in our campus.In spring when the cherry treesbloom, the flowers are so dense that looking from adistance, it seems as if the road were surrounded bypink-hued clouds.Especially when there is a breeze, petals of cherry blooms flutter and fallgently like a drizzle.Such breath-taking scene will put visitors into a kind of trance.What's more special is the buildings along the avenue.Built in early 1900s, they are nowcalled “cherry bloom castle”.They've witneed the history of our school and even ourcountry.You can learn a lot about our school there.In a word, a tour to the Cherry Avenue is both ansight-seeing and a greatopportunity to know about the culture of our school.【点评】
本次四级作文一反以往的图片题形式，改为情境式话题作文，可能让准备好图片题写作的同学有点措手不及。不过话题贴近生活，要求介绍大学校园的某个地方，即一篇介绍性的短文，难度不大，只要避免语法错误即可保证得分。想要博出彩拿高分，可以在词汇的丰富性上下功夫，避免同样的词多次出现。
【参考范文A】
Yu Garden
If a foreign friend of mine is going to visit myhometown, Shanghai, I would like to take her to YuGarden.Yu Garden is a traditional Chinese gardenlocated beside the City God Temple in the northeastof Shanghai.Here she will marvel at the exotic andexquisite beauty of the Chinese Garden.She canwalk on the crooked bridge and take photos of thebeautiful goldfish.Besides, she can taste the localcuisines like steamed buns, wonton noodles, soy milk.There are a variety of mouth-wateringsnacks there.Apart from the beautiful scenery and delicious food, she will also be attracted bythe remarkable performance of different craftsmen.For example, she will see Shanghai-stylepaper-cutting, and the proce of making Chinese candy and clay figurines.I believe my friend will have a great day if she visits Yu Garden.This is a place where thefeatures of this city are combined.【点评】
本次四级作文一反以往的图片题形式，改为情境式话题作文，可能让准备好图片题写作的同学有点措手不及。不过话题贴近生活，要求介绍自己家乡的某景点，写起来相对简单。此类文章在结构上的要求不像议论文那样严格，所以可以在语言文字上博出彩，增加词汇的丰富性、句子的流畅性都是不错的加分点。
The most interesting place
Dear Pacival,I am thrilled to know that you are going to visitmy hometown and I can’t wait see you again.I mieverything that happened when I was in your city, and your parents and you were so kind tome that I will try my best this time to make your stay an enjoyable and memerable one.My home town，Changsha, is the capital of Hunan province and best known as the star cityfor its well developed entertainment industry and tourism.There are numerous places andattractions worth recommending, and Yuelu Mountain is the first one that I’d like to introduce toyou.Firstly, in the foot of Yuelu Mountain is the prominent Yuelu Academy.It has anexceedingly long history and its architecture is characteristic of Song Dynasty.Then, after ahalf hour, we will reach the Bird Forest.There are various rare birds there, and they can sing,perform, and interact with us.After about an hour, we will arrive at the peak, Baiyun Summit.The scenery there is spectacular and we can have a wonderful panorama of the whole city.I bet you must be very excited about all these activities, and the Yuelu Mountain is waitingfor us to explore.All you need to do is pack up and go, and I aure you that this trip will be agreat fun.Should you have any question and suggestion, please let me know.I am looking forward to your arrival.Yours sincerely,Romeo
