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1.流行时尚
In modern society, fashion is becoming more highly valued in people's choice of clothes.Why? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
It seems that in recent years more and more people, especially in urban areas, are dreing more stylishly.Nowadays it is not uncommon to see people walking around in brand name clothes and sunglaes like celebrities.But why is this happening and is it a positive development?
The cause of this fashion obseion surely is connected to movies and pop culture.In today’s society, we are constantly seeing images of attractive movies stars and MTV videos with pop icons wearing the most recent styles.To some extent, and perhaps even subconsciously, this affects our own behaviour as we imitate what we see.One on level, being fashionable is quite healthy.It is natural for us to want to look good, because if we look good we feel good about ourselves.Especially in today’s world of work and relationships, it’s important to have good self-esteem and be confident.Looking good can help us achieve that.But from another angle, being too fashion-conscious has its problems.Sometimes people end up obseing about buying the most expensive things and look down upon others who can’t afford them.Such people become superficial and often don’t pay enough attention to the important things in life, like friendship and being a good person.So in the end, each person has to find the right balance regarding how fashionable to
be.There is nothing wrong with looking good and feeling good;in fact it’s human.But we must also be sure not to dwell on it so much.(265 words)
Harvey点评：
写作线索：首段，引出现象并表态；第二段，问答第一个问题why；第三段，positive；第四段；negative。末段总结。
本文清新自然，没有大道理，很多小常识。比如第三段第二句：It is natural for us to want to look good, because if we look good we feel good about ourselves.好作文不是高难词汇的堆砌。最简单的词汇也可以直指人心，赢得读者共鸣。
先学习下面的词汇和短语，然后再重读范文，体会它们在文中的运用
词汇
stylishlyadv.时髦地
celebrityn.名人，名流
obseionn.迷住，迷恋
popadj.流行的，通俗的iconn.偶像，图标
subconsciouslyadv.下意识地
imitatev.模仿
fashionableadj.流行的，时髦的self-esteemn.自尊
superficialadj.肤浅的短语
depend on取决于
be connected to 和…有联系
to some extent 某种程度上
from another angle从另一方面看
look down upon 瞧不起
pay attention to 关注
dwell on 仔细研究
三分钟熟读或背诵本文最实用的三个句子
Nowadays it is not uncommon to see people walking around in brand name
clothes and sunglaes like celebrities. Personally I feel that whether it’s good or bad depends on the individual’s
attitude. Especially in today’s world of work and relationships, it’s important to have
good self-esteem and be confident.
