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峰哥雅思：小作文如何改写题示句？
翻开剑8的第168页, 我们看到的是一篇很优秀的拿了8分的例文.然而为什么是8分而不是9分? 在第4行我们可以看到考官给出的这样的评价文字: The only thing that could improve this answer is an introduction to the topic that is not so closely copied from the prompt.这句话是什么意思? 我们先来比较一下下面两个句子.1题目中原话
The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.作者开头句:
The graph illustrates the quantities of goods transported in the united kingdom by four different modes of transport between the time period of 1974 and 2002.通过比较我们不难发现, 该文作者对提示句只是动了个小小的外科手术，显然是不够的.(当然作者第二句概括太“马虎”也是重要原因）.这就提醒我们广大考生在写雅思作文时可以不”换药”,但一定要”换汤”（如果“不换汤,不换药” 照抄原句,写了也白写,也不算在总字数内）。
那么, 如何”换汤换药”呢? 峰哥教你”四招御敌之策” :
第一招: 换”图表”
表示图形的词汇有很多为什么要在一棵树上吊死呢? 如line graph / line chart / pie chart / bar chart / figure / diagram / table / figures / statistics / these data.也可以在其前后加点东西, 如, the line graph given..., the pie chart provided...等等
第二招: 换个”动作”
常用的动词有: show / give / describe / indicate / illustrate / present / depict / reveal...第三招: 同义词或同义短语的转换 & 添加更多图表当中的细节。
如：between 1974 and 2002
可改为：
in the period(of 28 years)from 1974 to 2002.峰哥雅思：小作文如何改写题示句？
(如果是整十整十的也可用decade, half a centry 等）
如：the graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.可改为： The line graph given illustrates the quantities of goods transported in the Great
Britain during the time from 1974 and 2002 by four different ways of transport,namely, road, water, rail and pipeline.第四招：换句型：
则上句也可改为：
The line graph illustartes how the quantities of goods transported changed in each of the four different ways of transport in the UK during the period from 1974 to 2002.再送例句一个：（参见剑7第53页图）
The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meet in a European country between 1997 and 2004.可改为：
The line graph describes the changes in the amount of fish, beef, lamb and chicken consumed in a particular European country over the time from 1997 to 2004.也可改为：
The graph presents how the consumption of fish, beef, lamb, and chicken chaned a particular European country during the 15-year period from 1997 to 2004.
