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题目
进入初四以来，面临即将到来的中考的压力，学生的课业负担日
益繁重。在此种情况下，有人认为初四学生应该放弃爱好，专注
学习，不要在时间紧迫的条件下浪费更多的时间；但还有人认为
“磨刀不误砍柴工”，在课余时间坚持自己的爱好，不但不耽误学习，还可以调解大脑，促进学习。另外，爱好还可以怡情养性，陶冶情操增长知识，开阔视野。请就这一话题阐述你的观点。要求：观点鲜明，行文流畅。
不少于80字，运用至少两种时态。
写作指导
1、文章开头示例：
As a student in Grade Nine/Grade-Nine student, we are under great preure due to the coming entrance examination.Therefore, some people suggest we should give up hobbies in order to focus on study.However, I hold the different idea.I think we should keep our hobbies for the following reasons.2、论证：
正方（advantages/pros)
1.make life more rich and colorful
2.find out what your strong points and paion lie in/find what your
identity is
3.have a sense of achievement/succe/accomplishment
4.increase your knowledge that we cannot learn in cla and expand our views/ broaden one’s horizons
5.relax oneself/feel refreshed and then when we go back to study, we can focus on it with high efficiency(All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.)/study more effectively and efficiently/a good circle
6.bring us closer to succe
7.have a positive attitude towards life/Life will take on a new dimension
8.become an all-rounded/well-rounded student and increase your competitive edge in the future
9.become a talented person instead of a bookworm
10Make us healthy both physically and mentally
11.make more friends with those who share the samehobby with us
常见的错误 Frequent mistakes
I完整句子与片段 I Complete sentences and sentence fragments
1）逗号错误 1)Comma faults:
错误Faulty:
It was raining hard, they could not work in the fields.改进Improved:It was raining hard.They could not work in the fields.It was raining hard;they could not work in the fields.It was raining so hard that they could not work in the fields.They could not work in the fields because it was raining hard.5 It was raining hard, so they could not work in the field.2)句号错误 2）full stop faults:
错误 Faulty:
If everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment.The world will become much more beautiful.改进Improved:
If everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.3)句子片段 3）Sentence fragments:
错误Faulty:
In order to study hard.As a student in Grade Nine.II错误的搭配II The wrong collocation
get succe---achievethird but not(the)least---last
use the time---spendactive attitude---positive
final exam---entrance
the first, the last---former, latter
make our body stronger---make us stronger
III同义词混乱III The confusion of synonyms
for example, such as
Many things are challenging our hobbies.Such as
time and mark
…our hobbies, such as
We should spare some time to enjoy our hobbies, for example, playing the piano.…our hobbies, such as …
…our hobbies.For example, playing the piano is a good one to adjust our nerves.make（促使，使得）, let（允许，让）,enable（使能够，使有机会实现）
Hobbies can let us relax.make/enable … to
Don’t make her upset you.let
Hobbies enable us to pursue my dreams.By hobbies, we can relax ourselves.enjoying/through
IV其他错误IV Other mistakes
They believe that have hobbies can make them better.A student who has a hobby may happy…
In my opinion, I think we students should have
hobbies.they, it 指代不明 exercisestired, tiring
