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2018年5月雅思7分大作文范文赏析
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本场雅思写作话题直击灵魂，题目是：Children are facing more preures nowadays from academic(educational), social and commercial perspectives.What are the causes of these preures and what measures should be taken to reduce these preures?作为学生的我们为了不输在起跑线上，在学习和社交金钱上承受了这个年龄不该有的压力。到底为什么造成了我们的压力巨大，要如何减少我们身上的负担呢?
雅思写作解析
本题是一个典型的“报道型”(report)作文题目，要求考生对某个现象或问题进行原因分析，并给出解决办法。本题是一个比较新的题目。
我们需要找到题目中的关键词。首先，children很关键，本题要求我们讨论的主人公是“孩子”，因此本题最好不要过多讨论大学生，更不可讨论更宽泛意义上的“人”。其次，题目中已经给定了“学业”(academic)、“社会”(social)、“金钱”(commercial)三个层次的压力，因此讨论原因的时候最好都要涉及(虽然可以根据情况进行详略选择)。
雅思写作7分范文
What do you think makes children unhappy today? Researchers are pointing at the preures from various perspectives—academic, social and commercial.While the causes of these preures seem clear enough, there are no simple measures to reduce them.三立教育www.daodoc.com
It is easy to explain why children are facing academic, social and commercial preures.Firstly, although as parents there are few pleasures greater than their children succeeding at school, sometimes the preure is way too much.Parents’ unrealistically high expectations can backfire severely and end up causing their children to be unhappy.Secondly, all children have to face peer preure in school, which is generally beneficial to kids’ growth, yet the ugly reality is that peer preure reaches its highest intensity at just the age when children tend to be so insensitive, unkind, and even cruel as to purposefully make others unhappy.Thirdly, children are easily affected by advertising that attracts them to buy things they cannot poibly afford, and as a result, they may feel unhappy.Though it is never easy to fix these feelings of unhappine, there are poible measures to be taken to enhance the wellbeing of children who are under constant preures.To begin with, parents have to draw a line on the expectations of their children and find out their true potentials, rather than pushing them to unrealistic limits.Meanwhile, with patience and guidance, parents should keep an eye on their children who fall victims to online preure through social networking.Simultaneously, the authorities should do more to regulate advertising that are intended for children who are anxious to buy unneceary things.In conclusion, there are no easy solutions to the increasing academic, social, and commercial preures children face today.Frankly, I am quite peimistic because those factors that bring preures to children are not likely to go away, at least in the foreseeable future.三立教育www.daodoc.com
雅思写作高分表达
Point at 指向......Perspective 角度
Reduce 减少;减轻
Pleasure 快乐;愉悦
Way too much 太过了
Unrealistically 不切实际地
Backfire 回火;事与愿违
End up 最终落得个......Peer preure 同龄人压力
Intensity 强度
Purposefully 有意地
Afford 负担得起
Fix 解决
Enhance 提高
Constant 长期的Potential 潜力(的)
Keep an eye on...关注......Fall victim to...沦为......的牺牲品
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Frankly 坦白地说
Peimistic 悲观的In the foreseeable future 在可见的未来
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