中考写作_中考写作训练

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1、表示并列关系的:and, as well as, or„, In addition2、表示转折关系的:but, yet,however„ ,what’s more,3、表示时间关系的:when, while, after, before, then, after that„ ,at present ,up to

now, and finally,4、表示因果关系的:so, therefore ,as a result„

5、表示目的的:in order to, in order that , so as to, so that„

6、表示列举的:for example , such as„

7、表示总结性的: in all, in a word, generally speaking„

8、提起下文的:As we know;in my opinion;of course, it’s true that , above all。

一,对学生写作文段要求

1.语言通畅,语句连贯,层次清楚,意思正确,紧扣主题。

2.用词基本恰当,句子结构完整,语法正确,逻辑性强。

3.能正确使用常用的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系。

4.书写规范,能正确地使用大小写,字母和标点符号。

二,书面表达写作步骤

第一步,审题

1.审题主题是关键。写文章都不能离开主题。主题是文章所表达的中心,是文章的灵魂主宰。如果审不清猪蹄,就有可能出现“下笔千言,离题万里”的情况。范文如“My Favorite Sport”这篇文章,中心词是Favorite(最喜爱的)。首先,圈定大范围是Sport(运动);其次关键还在于Favorite(最喜爱的)。如果只把所有的运动罗列一遍,就不能说是“最喜爱的”就不切题了。

2.在审清主题的基础上,还需注意要审清文体。

第二步,选材

主题是文章的宗旨,主题必须统领材料,材料必须为主题服务,二者是密不可分,相辅相成的关系。既然要选材,就必须有充足的备选材料。只有平时多观察,多学习,多积累,才能保证材料充分,详实。在具备充足的材料的基础上,要学会去粗取精,去伪存真。此外,还要分清主次与详略,做到该详则详,该略则略,详略得当。

第三步,列提纲

写文章之前列提纲可以使杂乱无章的材料变得井然有序;列提纲可以使同学们的作文紧扣主题不跑题。列提纲时不必过于详细,可以根据题目要求,考虑你的文章分几段,或者分几个层次,每段的大意是什么,计划好文章的整体结构。提纲有时可以是短语或词组,做到明白即可。

第四步,写全文

写作时尽量做到一鼓作气,一气呵成。一定要切题,抓住要点。题目要求的内容一定要写进去,以保证内容的完整。写作时要注意语法正确,用词得当,语言地道。书写是要多套用句型,多用短句。

第五步,检查修改

好文章是改出来的。要提高英语写作水平,除了准确遣词造句,严禁布局外,文章的修改也是很重要的一步。文章写好后,要经过反复修改润色,才能措辞准确,句子流畅,结构严谨,因此修改文章是提高写作水平的有效方法。

用词方面

代词的格和指代关系是否应用正确?

名词的单复数正确与否?

动词的搭配是否准确?

形容词的比较级和最高级用得是否对?

副词的位置是否恰当?

句子方面

句型结构是否完整?

主谓人称是否一致?

时态,语态,语气是否正确?

连句运用是否自然恰当?

篇章方面

文章主题是否准确?

文章内容是否充实,要点有无遗漏?

文章的文体及所用的组织方法是否恰当?

全文篇幅比例是否恰当?(前松后紧?前紧后松?)

细节方面

单词拼写及大小写字母是否正确?

标点的使用是否正确?

三,书面表达常考的写作范围-------中考8个话题

1.介绍人

自己,家庭,朋友,老师,个人感受等

这类作文通常用一般现在时态写作。

2.介绍地点

旅游等

这类作文通常用一般现在时态写作。

3.校园生活

春游,校规,科目学习困难等

4.课外生活

家庭生活,家务劳动,电影,个人爱好等

5.假期安排

计划,过去经历等

计划类文章用一般将来时态,过去经历用一般过去时态

6.节假日活动

志愿者活动,过去经历

7.环境,健康

环保,疾病,食品健康等

8.个人观点建议

提建议,劝告等

四,书面表达的句式训练

简单句

1.主系表eg:I am a middle school student.He is fourteen.2.主谓eg:I ran fast.3.主谓宾eg:We will have dinner together.4.主谓宾补eg:We keep our claroom clean and tidy.简单句+状语短语

1.时间状语eg:I am a middle school student now.He is fourteen this year.2.地点状语eg:We will have dinner together at home.简单句(主句)+状语从句

1.时间状语从句eg:My parents helped me a lot when I was in trouble.2.条件状语从句eg:If you have any questions,please write to me.3.原因状语从句eg:I like English best because it is interesting and fun.主句+宾语从句

我认为(我想,我希望)

eg:I think he is helpful and great.eg:I believe you will love this city.eg:I hope I can be a volunteer some day.使用定语从句

我喜欢可以跟着跳舞的音乐。

eg:I love music I can dance to.父母是我最爱的人。

eg:My parents are the people who I love most.简单句+连词+简单句

1.并列连接

eg:I am a middle school student and I study in No.1 Middle School.2.转折连接

eg:I work hard at English but my English nor good enough.3.因果连接

eg:He is good at English so I often ask him for help.五,结合话题,写作训练实例

09年北京市中考英语写作试题----课外生活话题---家务方面

某英文报纸就家务劳动(Housework)话题征文,请你投稿。每个家庭都有许多家务,人人都应该学做过一些。谈谈你经常帮父母做哪些家务,有什么体会,并打算在暑假里为家里做什么。

提示词语:every family,lots of housework,learn to do,help,parents,be proud of

单句训练

1.我做家务(简单句:主谓)I do chores.2.我经常做家务(简单句:主谓+频率状语+地点状语)I do housework at home every day.3.我一星期洗两次衣服(简单句:主谓+频率状语)I do the laundry once a week.4.我每天叠被子,在我起床后(主谓+时间状语从句)

I make my own bed after I get up at 6:30 every morning.5.如果我做更多家务,我父母下班后将更轻松。(条件状语从句)

If I do more chores,my parents will be relaxed at home after their hard work.6.我喜欢做家务因为它可以使我爸爸妈妈在家轻松。(原因状语从句)

I like/love/enjoy doing housework because it will make my parents relaxed at home.7.我希望分担父母的辛苦工作。(宾语从句)

I hope I can share my parents’ hard work.8.对于我来说最简单的家务每天只花我10分钟扫地,使我和父母都非常开心。

Spending 10 minutes in sweeping the floor which is easy for me makes my parents and me very happy.写作环节

审题---中文小段---汉译英---写简单句---连长句---标亮点---文章升华---整体修改

环节一:审题(定人称,定时态)

人称:第一人称

时态:必须使用一般现在时和将来时(可选择穿插使用过去式或现在完成时)

环节二:中文小文段(中文单句)

每个家庭都有许多家务。

人人应该学做一些家务。

我经常帮父母扫地,洗碗。

我喜欢帮家长做家务,因为他们工作努力,辛苦,下班后非常累。

我希望他们能放松并且高兴。

暑假就要到了,我打算学做饭,我相信父母会以我为自豪。

环节三:汉译英

1.Every family has a lot of housework.2.We should learn to do some housework.3.I often help my mom and dad do some.4.I can sweep the floor and clean the dishes.5.I love helping my parents with the housework.6.They work hard every day and are very tired after work.7.I hope they can relax and be happy at home.8.The summer vacation is coming,and I am going to learn to cook.9.I believe my parents will be proud of me.环节四:连长句

3+4

I often help my mom and dad do some such as sweeping the floor and cleaning the dishes.5+6

I love helping my parents with housework because they work hard every day and are very tired after work.环节五:出亮点

Every family has a lot of housework.In my opinion,teenagers are supposed to learn to do some housework.How about you?I often help my mom and dad do some such as sweeping the floor and cleaning the dishes.I love helping my parents with housework bacause they work hard every day and are very tired after work.I hope they can relax and be happy at home.The summer vacation is coming and I am going to learn to cook.I believe my parents will be proud of me.环节六:文章升华

Every family has a lot of housework.In my opinion,teenagers are supposed to learn to do some housework.How about you?

I often help my mom and dad do some such as sweeping the floor and cleaning the dishes.I love helping my parents with housework because they work hard every day and are very tired after work.As for their daughter,I am eager to share their hard work and want them share my happine.So I will try my best to do more chores to make them relaxed and happy at home.The summer vacation is coming,and I am going to learn to cook.I believe my parents with be

proud of me.Let’s do housework now!Being helpful to our parents is fantastic.环节七:修改文章

课堂练习

在和谐社会里,人与人之间的互帮互助已构成我们生活中的重要组成部分。下周英国友好学校将来你校访问,你校的英语俱乐部将举行一次以“Helping Each Other Makes the World Wonderful”为主题的英语演讲比赛。假如李智要参加比赛,请你以李智的名义用英语写一篇演讲稿。内容要点提示:1.帮助同学---友谊2.帮助老人---幸福3.帮助病人---快乐4.帮助别人体会。。

参考范文

Hello,everyone.I’m LiZhi.It’s nice to speak about help here.In our life we often help others and also get help from others.When we help our clamates with their study and other things,we can develop oue friendship.If we give a hand to old people,we can understand the meaning of pleasure.As we know,patients need help most.When we help them,happine comes to us.Helping others is very important in our life.I think we can get much when we help the people around us.As the saying goes,”Giving is much better than receiving.”

Thank you for your listening!

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