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【福建省漳州市2014高考英语第三次联考试题】 书面表达（25分）
一项社会调查发现，目前许多在城市上班的子女因为工作等原因每年只能回乡下老家或者甚至常年没回家，忽视了家里年迈的父母。老人常常盼着子女回家吃饭或者哪怕打个电话，可是经常希望落空。请用英语写一篇短文反应此情况，说说你的感想，并呼吁全社会来关心老年人。词数：120左右。
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【参考范文】One poible version: Nowadays, many young people who work in big cities rarely return home to see their old parents, who, however, expect their children to be back to have dinners with them, or just make a phone call every day, especially during festivals.As a result, their expects often become disappointments.In my opinion, the old don’t ask for much.They simply hope their children can come back, talk with them and have a meal together.But the young fail to do so.They think the old are satisfied as long as they have enough to eat and drink.In fact, they can easily get lonely and they often mi their children.So the young should spend more time with their parents and also it’s time that our society took some measures to solve this problem and call on everyone to care about the old.Only in this way can we make our society more beautiful.【山东省日照市2014高考英语一模试卷】 写作(满分30分)外教Chris Pearson开设了一个英语辅导班(English Tutorial)，按照学生实际需要进行辅导。参加者须根据个人实际情况提出中请并选择辅导内容。假如你是李明，请你按照下面提示给外教写一个电子邮件。内容如下： 1．介绍个人情况：
2．说明辅导意向(如：口语、语法、写作、文化知识等其中的一项或几项)； 3．表达愿望。
注意：
1．词数：120-150；开头已经给出，不计入总侧数； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Mr Pearson，I am writing you to apply for the membership of the English Tutorial．________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________
【参考的范围】One poible version: Dear Mr Pearson, I am writing you to apply for the membership of the English Tutorial.As a Senior Grade 3 student, I think I’m doing well in English because I always get good marks in written English tests.But still I think I am not a perfect learner because I’m not so good at spoken English, and that is what troubles me most.And when I listen to native speakers, I find it hard to catch what they talk about.Whenever I speak English, I often make some mistakes, which annoys me.So, I want to be a member in the speaking tutorial so that I can improve my spoken English and communicate better with others.I’m sure I’ll do much better in it with your help.Looking forward to your reply.3mobile phone or other means to get in touch with his parents.He was angry and felt lonely.He thought his parents hated him and that was why they left him in a boarding school.[写作内容] 1.以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。
2.以约120个词讲述一次你（或你的朋友）想家的经历，内容包括： ⑴ 时间、地点和起因；
⑵ 想家给学习和生活带来的影响； ⑶ 你（或你朋友）是如何应对的。[写作要求] 1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。[评分标准] 概括准确，语言规范，内容何时，语句连贯。
【参考范文】读写任务：Version 1: Sam, a student, was sent to a boarding school, in which he mied his parents very much, and thus he got sick and could not focus his attention on his leons.(31 words)In fact, in real life, everyone must have an experience of feeling homesick.I remember when I was 10 years old, because my parents were busy, I was sent to my uncle’s in another city.Right here, I would have to study in school for two years.Although my uncle and his family were really kind to me, I still felt homesick.At first, I couldn’t sleep well, because I didn’t adapt to the climate there.And, since different teachers have different teaching styles, it was difficult for me to understand the leons in the beginning.Besides, I was new for the students there.As a result, hardly did I have any close friends.Feeling terribly lonely, I couldn’t help thinking my parents and my fellow guys in my city every now and then.However, as days went on, I slowly adapted myself to the new environment.It was-
