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shopping on the Internet is becoming increasingly popular with the development of the Internet.However, it is like a double edge sword which has both pros and cons.as for me, I do not likeit anyway.I believe that it has more harm than good.I side with my idea for three reasons.First of all, seeing is not believing.The items you boughtmay not besame as what they have been showed on the screen.The color ,material ,size may not fit for you, which make you disappointed.Meanwhile ,you might be cheated easily by shopping on the Internet.Some online storeswouldnever send anything to you after they have got paid.It’s really frustrated that you will find nowhere to get your money back.what's more ,there are hundreds of pages for you to view for finding an ideal target.Shopping online is a waste of time and energy exactly.You will be more tired than enjoying browsing through all kinds of stores.In general ,we should never be more attentive when shopping on the Internet.Not only whenshopping , but also when browsing the web as well.Focus on more details so that we could make full use of the Internet.就是这些啦 其实我作文真的很一般很一般 绝对是实话~
开头的你那个advantages and the disadvantages我给换成pros and cons了 是为了不和后面的重复 而且开头也不会显得很沉重
中间部分顺序稍微改了下 记得小学学过什么欲扬先抑还是欲抑先扬之类的 就用了觉得这样比较通顺吧 其他的你原本写的也已经
很好了 我就是凭语感稍微改了一下 觉得可能通顺点吧 你再看看还有什么不顺的再改改 还有你的第二条说付款后商家不发货 我没有太多的网购经验 会有这样的情况？啊哈 我孤陋寡闻了
结尾 我通常也比较头疼这个 就想了些大路边的话写上去了 但愿能激起你的思维让你想出更好的句子
就这样吧
