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I love my hometown
My hometown is in（不需要）Shifosi town,Zhenping county（Henan province）.It is Chinese Jade Home.修改为：It is a jade town in China.或 It is known as a town of jade.This is a busy and beautiful town.Here’sbest places are Yudiao Bay and Guoji Yucheng.（There are famous Yudiao Bay and Guojiyucheng.）
First of all, I say(let me introduce)YudiaoBay.In my hometown, there is a river called Zhao He.Yudiao Bay is a star in Zhao He.There are two bridges like two large dragons(which is about ten meters wide and fifty meters long)on the river.The first bridge is called Yufo bridge.it has three half circles every sides.They are panted white and 修改为：the both side of the bridge)are white jade boards.There , like a big mirror.The second bridge is called（不需要）Longxiang bridge.It has wide road and sidewalks.People coming and going.Every day hundreds of cars and bikes(加上go)through the bridge.The river bands are green willows.Leaves are hanging the long branches, like green waterfalls.Riverside park is a good place.There are many kinds of flowers and trees.Some bees flying and butterflies are dancing in the flowers.Along the rivertoward south, soon(不需要)you see some grey buildings.That is Guoji Yucheng.The gates of Guoji Yucheng are maded by huge stones.They looks have（不需要）three floors high.The base of the gates carved with elephants ,lions etc.the top of the middle gate are sitting five golden Buddhas.Into the middle gate, you will see a large jade coin.Near，there is a yellow jade book.Then go to inside, there are pools, some different jade shapes.The last side,there are three jade toads.West of the Guoji Yucheng is a garden.There is a gallery, like a flying dragon.The middle, there is a large waterwheel, children canclimb to the watersheel , very fun.(改为they can enjoy themselves)
I love my hometown, welcome to the children acro the country come here to play.（没看明白啥意思）
修改后：I love my hometown ,welcome to my hometown and you will also love it.
