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高考开放性作文分析与练习

一 高考开放性作文要求

开放性作文字数不少于50个单词，要求文章扣题，内容充实、健康；思维活跃，逻辑清晰；语言规范，交际得体。这对学生构思、表达以及语句的组织运用能力有很高的要求。

二 高考中常见的开放性作文文章类型有：

1． 复述故事

 One day, we were having an English cla when suddenly there was a knock on the door---（西城一模 2004）

One day, we were having an English cla when suddenly there was a knock on the door.Our teacher went out and soon returned with a smile on her face.She told us that a group of American students were visiting our school and they would like to chat with us in English.We were very glad to have this opportunity to practise our English.Soon pleasant conversations began. Today is March 5th.To learn from Lei Feng, at 3:30 p.m., my clamates and I went---（西城二模2004）

Today is March 5th.To learn from Lei Feng, at 3:30pm, my clamates and I went in groups separately to visit some old teachers who had retired from our school.We chatted with them for a while, and then began to do some cleaning for them.Everyone worked very hard and we really felt glad we were able to do something for the old teachers.We hoped to have more chances to take part in such activities.2． 解决方案

 On the morning of June 7, Li Ming is taking a bus on his way to take the entrance examination.Unfortunately, he is caught in a traffic jam because of an accident.How can he manage to get there in time? Please think out two or three different ways for him.(海淀一模2004)

First of all he can persuade the bus driver to allow him to get off so that he can walk out of the heavy traffic jam to take another bus or a taxi.Or he can get off and ask an aistant in a nearby shop to lend him a bike.Since it is an important day for the high school graduates, dialing 110 and getting help from the police is one of the choices as well. May 31, No Smoking Day, is drawing near.Now what do you want to say to the smokers to help them get rid of the bad habit?（东城二模2004）

Today more and more people care for the problem of smoking because it is polluting the air, also it’s harmful to the people’s health and will cause lung cancer.When you want to smoke, you can eat something delicious or do some sports instead.Also you can ask the doctor for help.What’s the important, I think you should make a plan to get rid of the bad habit.It’s our hope that we all take an active part in the activity.I’m sure you’ll succeed in giving up smoking.3． 设计活动

 You are talking with one of your close friends about your plans for the summer vacation.You say to him, “ I’m going to enjoy myself in the summer vacation.” He asks, “ what exactly are you going to do to have fun?”

You tell him what you want to do to make your vacation great fun.Be sure to use one or more examples to show what you mean.(2003北京)I’ll go to a beach to see the seabirds flying in the dark-blue sky and drive a motorboat, sailing through clear water toward the rising sun.Then I’ll surf the “nba.com” website, play games on “ FreeEnglish.com, or chat with friends online about hot movies like “ The Lord of the Rings” and “Harry Potter”.4． 解释原因

 Tell your friends why you are looking forward to the weekend.(宣武一模2004)

Having a good rest and reading some books are the most important weekend activities.Besides these two, I sometimes go shopping with my parents.Sometimes I go to visit my friends.I can also do something I like, such as watching TV, playing ping-pong, etc.I enjoy weekends very much because only on weekends can I find myself a true person but not only a student.5． 发表评论

 What do you think of going online in our spare time?

I think we can go online in our spare time.Through the Internet, we can gain plenty of the newest knowledge and the latest news at home and abroad.What’s more, network offer us a convenient way to communicate with each other.The Internet makes our lives outside cla colourful and various.But I don’t think it is right that a lot of precious time is spent in playing computer games, or even some students are often absent from school for days.I think we should control the time online. China should devote major efforts to developing car industry.Do you agree?（上海2001）

I agree that China should devote major efforts to developing car industry.Now more and more families have their own cars.It’s very convenient for the people to go to work.In holidays, all the families can travel to some place or go to visit exhibition far away by car.They save a lot of their spare time.With the development of car industry, the economy in china is developing rapidly too.But a lot of problems are coming about.Traffic in cities is getting heavier and heavier.The city is being polluted more and more seriously.To solve these problems, something must be done.三 学生习作存在的问题

1．审题出现严重错误（时态、文体、人称）

2．文章结构混乱，逻辑不通，罗嗦不到主题

3．英语汉化

4．错误百出

四 解决方案

1．熟悉英语文章结构特点

2．朗读课文，背诵范文，大量课外阅读

3．强化基本句型的学习以及好词好句的积累

五．高考开放性作文练习

1.One of you close friends tells you : “ I am suffering from depreion(沮丧、消沉).I have trouble sleeping.I’m often tired.When I think about the future I feel hopele about it.I don’t enjoy anything.I am never happy.I don’t laugh or smile any more.” You would like to help him/

her to find one or more solutions.Tell him or her what he/ she should do.(崇文一模2004)

Mary, don’t be upset.I have some pieces of advice for you.First of all, whenever you feel blue, try listening to some songs with beautiful melody(旋律).If you still feel depreed, look at yourself in a mirror and smile for no le than 30 seconds, then you’ll believe that nothing is serious and have a good mood.Of course, you’d better try to find an adult you can trust to talk to.I do hope these help and next day will be better.2.You want to buy a computer.Tell your parents why you need a computer.As we all know, computers have been of great use and will be used more and more in our daily life.Computers are useful in my English learning.There are piles of learning software I can use.Besides, we can gain plenty of the newest knowledge and the latest news at home and abroad through the internet.I don’t see anything wrong for me to spend some time playing games.After all, we need something to enjoy ourselves.3.The football match between Cla One and Cla Three was going on.You were one of the players of Cla One.In the first half, your team lost a goal.What happened in the second half?

Although we lost a goal in the first half, we didn’t lose heart.We encouraged each other and determined to win the second one.After it began, we did our best to take every chance.About 15 minutes later, I shot the ball paed by Xiaoming.We got it.With more enthusiasm(热情),finally we defeated them at the score 2:1.We became the winners.Although we were nearly worn out.We were extremely excited and happy.4.The International Youth Art Festival is about to be held in our city.As a young volunteer, I’m going to do a lot of good deeds for it.What will you do?(上海2001春)

The International Youth Art Festival is about to be held in our city.As a young volunteer, I’m going to do a lot of good deeds for it.During the International Youth Art Festival , I will do my best to work for the festival.For example, I will help to keep orders, help the actors, clean the spots, and so on.It is a pleasure to do a lot of things for the the International Youth Art Festival.I think I can do the best.5.Nowadays, doing part-time jobs has become a fashion to us students.What’s your opinion?

There are many advantages in doing part-time jobs while you are in school.It can offer you a chance to make money.You can also gain some working experience from it.Therefore, you will be able to prepare yourself for the future.However, part-time jobs also have some disadvantages.On one hand, it might occupy some of your time.On the other hand, if you don’t know how to deal with the money, it can have a bad influence on you.Because of the advantages and disadvantages, you should maintain a correct attitude and choose jobs properly.Then you can benefit from it.Ⅵ.书面表达（共35分）

（一）（共15分）

请结合材料，按要求用英文写作，不少于60字。

In order to get higher scores in examinations, some senior 3 students don’t have a rest during the ten-minute break.Instead, they just stay in the claroom and study.要求：