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As is shown above, on the lake floats a boat, on which one couple of tourists are throwing waste into the lake, which has been in a me and full of various wastes including lunch boxes, fishbone and its like.There has been a heated discuion about the problem the picture carries in the newspaper recently.The picture, at the first glimpse, seems to be simple, but only a penetrating sight can pierce through it superficial meaning.The picture tells us that nothing can be compared with environment protection.Nobady(拼写错误Nobody)dare fail to attach due attention to（给予了适当的注意。）The significance of environment protection(建议使用： environmental protection).To begin with, environment protection（protecting environment）can bring us a comfortable atmosphere.Additionally, it puts our society in harmonious position, promoting mutual understanding, enhancing friendly ties and shortening the gap between people.Consequently, the conflicts and tensions could be relieved by doing so.Were there no environment protection（建议使用：Were indifferent to the destruction of environment）, hardly can we taste the wonder of our life.To solve this burning problem, it is imperative for people to attach attention to（建议使用：pour focus on）the significance of environment protection.Moreover, the general public is supposed to enhance their awarene that environment protection play a crucial role in our life.In brief, only in a reasonable, prosperous and healthy
atmosphere can we hope to witne the ideal scene in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost.点评：以上作文系vip作文班学员所写（cet6——608分，某985重点高校学生），总体来讲，此作文得分在14分左右。不足之处：
（1）environment protection一词出现频率过高，建议用其他词予以代替，比如：protecting environment, environmental protection.（2）Nobady拼写错误应改为：Nobody，一篇高分作文可能因为某个简单的单词拼写错误，而给阅卷老师留下不好的印象。
（3）The picture使用频率过高，建议使用cartoon, image, picture,drawing等。
2012年考研英语作文预测（仅供参考）
大作文：
（1）正面（正确、积极的）：01、02、03、08、10
反面（不正确的做法、消极）：04、05、06、07、09、11
（2）一幅图还是两幅图（04、06）
（3）作文有无规定题目（仅02）
（4）1st：描述图画，2nd:解释图画要表达的含义，3rd：严重性及采取的举措。
例如：2011环境污染；2010：一个火锅——多种文化
＊ 2012重点预测正面
小作文：重点书信
