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My Story
Time paed so quickly.(逗号不能用来连接两个完整的句子，除非一个是从句，或者有连接词，所以这里要改为句号).Imperceptibly we had entered the University.There’s(去掉)A series of feelings appeared in my heart when the first school day is coming.（主语？）Not only looked forward to meeting the new friends in school, but also worried about the entirely different college life.The first few days in school gave(left)me deep impreion.The most impreive was our leader sister, because she was the best and the most responsible leader I had ever seen.She helped hold the “Welcome Party for Freshmen”, which was so useful that we could get familiar with our new clamates.Furthermore, the first dinner party for thanking our leader sister made me fell in love with my new university cla---The Department of Tourism One.But it’s a pity that I couldn’t join the military training with my clamates because I was ill in that time, this is my one regret.Another thing that moved me a lot is the sports meeting of our school yesterday.I had participated in two projects.The first one is 20 people square team on behalf of our cla(? Ambiguous, what’s that sport event exactly?), and the other one is the mini sport event called “throw a dart”.The sports meeting was the beginning.First of all is the square team.Our square team was only trained for two days, but the result was
quite good.The training teacher not only trained our sense of community, but also an attachment to our cla.In addition, I was a wonderful viewer who will cheer for the athletes in our tourism department.My friends and I will run in the whole playground to cheer them up.I believe that the university will make the students who stay away from home more independent and mature.Comments :
Rather good!Keep going!Pay more attention to your grammar.
