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Dear James,Thankes for your last E-mail.Today, I will tell you something about theweather in my city.There are four seasons in a year in my city.They are spring, summer, fall and winter.In spring, the trees turn green and the flowers bloom.In summer, the trees have many green leaves.In fall, the leaves fell from the trees.In winter, there is nothing on the trees.I like winter best.I can throw the snowballs, make snowmen and ski on the snow with my friend.See you soon.Yours

Anne

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