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A Special Memory for me
1.I have a lot of memories of the past.Some are happy and others are unforgettable.But there is a special memory which occurred when I was five.That day, I was playing in the garden when a helicopter flew over me.I was surprised and asked my mother why the kite was grey in a loud voice.My mother, together with other people who were in the garden, was all laughed.And then my mother explained it to me.Now I think althought I was funny at that time, it’s still good of me to ask questions.So I think never be too shy to ask questions.2.I have a lot of special memories, but the most special memory for me is making a speech in public for the first time.When I was in a primary school.One day, my teacher told me to attend a speech contest.When I heard it , I felt very nervous.It was my first time to make a speech in public.I prepared very carefully.But when I stood on the stage, I was still very nervous.Then I told myself you can do it….A month later, I got the prize.I was really proud of myself.I got the courage from that and I think I will also work hard.3.I have many different memories in my mind which make me happy or sad.But taking a bus to school alone for the first time is a special memory for me.As I was seven, my parents let me go to school myself.I felt terrible at first.But soon I was used to going to school myself.I think it’s special because I learn to be independent from that experience.结尾: It was rewarding and helpful.And it made me know that nothing is impoible if you put all your heart into it.It gives me a special memory.
