成人高考专升本英语作文写作要点分析由刀豆文库小编整理，希望给你工作、学习、生活带来方便，猜你可能喜欢“专升本英语写作重点”。
短文写作总分25分。短文写作部分要求考生写出一篇100-120字左右的短文。题材以记叙文为主，试卷可能给出题目或规定情景或段首句。
短文写作的要求为：能够正确表达思想，意义连贯，无重大语言错误。
写作内容涉及生活，一般常识和私人信件。
短文写作中的题目我们也可以称作命题写作。
情景写作也就是便条写作。
段首句式的写作可以称为主题句式的写作。
一、英语写作训练的要点
英语写作最重要的一点是用英语思维进行写作。
通病：习惯于先把作文翻译成汉语，然后逐字翻译成英语。
在理解和使用英语词汇时，要注意英语和汉语在意义上的不同。
所以我们在从事英语写作训练的时候：
1.要明确英语写作的意义。
2.要学习和掌握必要的写作理论。
3.要通过大量的阅读，新概念第二册比较适合。
写提纲的好处：
1.可以扩大思路
2.可以按次序排好素材
3.将文章分成段
4.明确写作的中心思想
“The Advantages of Travel(旅行的益处。)”
根据这一题目，在构思时可能会想到以下内容：
1.seeing strange and different things(看到各种奇异的东西)
2.meeting people with different interests(遇到有各种不同兴趣的人)
3.keeping us fit and healthy(有助于身体健康)
4.enjoying beautiful scenery(欣赏各地美景)
5.understanding how people live(了解人们怎样生活)
6.visiting famous cities and scenic spots(浏览名城和名胜)
7.tasting different foods and local flavors(品尝各地风味)
8.getting ideas of the conditions and customs of other people
（了解各地风土人情)
9.arousing the fervent love for our motherland(激起对祖国的热爱)
10.gaining knowledge of geography and history(获得地理历史知识)
11.making one le narrow minded(使人心胸开阔)
12.gaining other knowledge(获得其他方面知识)
13.seeing places read of in books(目睹曾在书上读到过的地方)
The Advantages of Travel
Travel is beneficial to us in at least three ways.First，by traveling we can enjoy the beautiful scenery in different places.We will see with our own eyes many places
read of in books，and visit some famous cities and scenic spots.Second，we will meet people with different interests and see strange and different things when we travel.We can get
ideas of the conditions and customs of other people，taste different foods and local flavors if we like.In this way，we can understand how differently other people live.Third，travel will not only help us to gain knowledge of geography and history and other knowledge，which arouses the
fervent love for our motherland，but will also help us keep healthy and make us le narrow-minded.Travel does benefit
us both mentally and physically.With all these advantages of travel，it is no wonder that travel has now become more popular than ever in China.在写100字左右的作文，我们也强调三段论。第一句话或第一段我们强调我们要写的内容，第二段找一些例子阐述一下。第三段再次把我们
强调的内容引申的说一下。
二． 文章的三个部分
引言 introduction
正文 body
结束语 conclusion
专升本英语作文考试中，语法一定要简明扼要，而且要正确。
写好主题句的三条原则
1.要能说明段落中心思想的内容。
2.要有能体现中心思想的关键词。
3.尽量使用简洁明了的句子。
以下是短文写作中使用率最高、覆盖面最广的基本句式，每组句式的功能相同或相似，考生可根据自己的情况选择其中的1－2个，做到能够
熟练正确地仿写或套用。
1．表示原因
1）There are three reasons for this． 2）The reasons for this are as follows．
3）The reason for this is obvious．
4）The reason for this is not far to seek．
5）The reason for this is that．．．
6）We have good reason to believe that．．．
例如：
There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life．Firstly，people’s living standard has been
greatly improved．Secondly，most people are well paid，and they can afford what they need or like．Last but not least，more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life．
如写第一个句子没有把握，可将其改写成两个句子。如：Great changes have taken place in our life． There are three reasons for
this．这样写可以避免套用中的表达失误。
2．表示好处
1）It has the following advantages．
2）It does us a lot of good．
3）It benefits us quite a lot．
4）It is beneficial to us．
5）It is of great benefit to us．
例如：
Books are like friends．They can help us know the world better，and they can open our minds and widen our horizons．
Therefore，reading extensively is of great benefit to us．
3．表示坏处
1）It has more disadvantages than advantages．
2）It does us much harm．
3）It is harmful to us．
例如：
However，everything divides into two．Television can also be harmful to us．It can do harm to our health and make us lazy
if we spend too much time watching television．
4．表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能
1）It is important（neceary，difficult，convenient，poible）for sb．to do sth．
2）We think it neceary to do sth．
3）It plays an important role in our life．
例如：
Computers are now being used everywhere，whether in the government，in schools or in busine．Soon，computers will be
found in every home，too．We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life
and we have stepped into the Computer Age．
5．表示措施
1）We should take some effective measures．
2）We should try our best to overcome（conquer）the difficulties．
3）We should do our utmost in doing sth．
4）We should solve the problems that we are confronted（faced）with．
例如： The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious．Therefore，we must take some effective
measures to solve it.6．表示变化
1）Some changes have taken place in the past five years．
2）A great change will certainly be produced in the world’s communications．
3）The computer has brought about many changes in education．
例如：
Some changes have taken place in people’s diet in the past five years．The major reasons for these changes are not far to
seek．Nowadays，more and more people are switching from grain to meat for protein，and from fruit and vegetable to milk
for vitamins．
7．表示事实、现状
1）We cannot ignore the fact that．．．
2）No one can deny the fact that．．．
3）There is no denying the fact that．．．
4）This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in．
5）However，that’s not the case．
例如：
We cannot ignore the fact that industrialization brings with it the problems of pollution．To solve these problems，we
can start by educating the public about the hazards of pollution．The government on its part should also design stricter
laws to promote a cleaner environment． 8．表示比较
1）Compared with A，B．．．
2）I prefer to read rather than watch TV．
3）There is a striking contrast between them．
例如：
Compared with cars，bicycles have several advantages besides being affordable．Firstly，they do not consume natural
resources of petroleum．Secondly，they do not cause the pollution problem．Last but not least，they contribute to people’
s health by giving them due physical exercise．
9．表示数量
1）It has increased（decreased）from．．．to．．．
2）The population in this city has now increased（decreased）to 800，000．
3）The output of July in this factory increased by 15％ compared with that of January．
例如：
With the improvement of the living standard，the proportion of people’s income spent on food has decreased while that
spent on education has increased．
再如：
From the graph listed above，it can be seen that student use of computers has increased from an average of le than two
hours per week in 2008 to 20 hours in 2009.=============================
Practical Writing Samples 英语应用文写作范文 1.A Letter of Apology 道歉信
由于未能及时赴约，给老师写一封道歉信，解释原因请求原谅同时提出希望下一次约会。You have made an appointment with your teacher, but failed to keep it.Write a letter to your teacher to
1)Apologize for your failure to keep the appointment,2)Explain your reason to your teacher, and
3)Expre your wish to make another appointment.Dear Prof.Wang，I’m writing to ask you to excuse me for not being able to keep our appointment.I do know that this is very impolite
and must have caused you much trouble.I do reckon that at present any explanation is pale and futile.However I do not want you to misunderstand me.On my
way to your office, an old lady suddenly fainted due to heart attack on the bus.I stopped a taxi and sent her into a
nearby hospital.I stayed there until her son came, which spoiled our appointment.I am aware that our appointment is of importance.I do hope that you would be kind enough to spare your valuable to
meet me.I am looking forward to hearing from you.Sincerely Yours
Li Ming
2.A Letter of Thanks 感谢信
生病住院两周，老师和同学过来看望你，为此你给他们写一封感谢信，表达你的感激之情。You have been ill and hospitalized for two weeks.Your teachers and clamates went to see you.Write a letter to them to
1)Thank them for their coming to see you,2)Describe your feeling, and
3)State your present condition.Dear Teachers and Clamates，First of all, please allow me to say “Thank you” to all of you.It is very kind of you to spare your valuable time
during the period of final examinations and come to see me.Your visit has given me much confidence and power to overcome the illne.When I first came to the hospital, I really
felt lonely and did not have enough courage and confidence to overcome the illne.Your visit has made me feel that I am
not poor and lonely in the world and in fact I am living in a world of love, which has brought me much confidence and
power to overcome the illne.These days, my condition has been obviously improved due to the careful treatment offered by doctors and nurses.Doctors have told me that I will completely recover from illne in two weeks.I hope that I can see you earlier.Again, special thanks go to all of you.Sincerely Yours
Li Ming
3.A Letter of Invitation邀请信
春节即将来临，你写信邀请外国朋友来中国过春节。
The Spring Festival is coming shortly.You intend to invite your foreign friend to come to China and spend the traditional
Chinese Festival together.Write a letter to him/her to
1)Expre your warm invitation to him/her,2)Introduce the Spring Festival, and
3)Mention the places you will accompany him/her to visit.Dear Beckham，First of all, please allow me to expre my heartfelt invitation to you.Since the Spring Festival is coming shortly, I
sincerely invite you to come to China and spend the holiday with me.Spring Festival is of much importance to Chinese people.It has a long history and Chinese have attached much importance
to the holiday.To be exact, the Spring Festival has been the most significant holiday.The Spring Festival is to Chinese
what Christmas is to the Westerners.If you come, I am going to accompany you to fairgrounds(庙会), where you can have a close look at some of the Chinese
traditions.I am looking forward to your reply.Sincerely Yours
Li Min 4．A Letter of Suggestion 建议信 给北京市市长王岐山写信，希望自己能成为2008年奥运会的志愿者，同时提出自己的看法。
You have watched the 2004 Athens Olympic Games and are interested in becoming a volunteer for 2008 Beijing Olympic Games.Write a latter to Wang Qishan, mayor of the capital city, to
1)Make suggestions for the 2008 preparation work,2)Expre your wish to be a volunteer.Dear Wang Qishan，I am a senior in Peking University.The 2008 Beijing Olympic Games is coming in two years.After watching the 2004
Athens Olympic Games, I can not help writing to you.First of all, here is my suggestion for the preparation work of the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games.The construction work
of the sports building must be completed in time according to the contract.In Athens, the swimming stadium was not
accomplished in time so that the event had to be held in the open air, which has brought negative effect on the
performance of athletes.In one word, to protect the international image of China and ensure the Olympic competition, we
must finish our preparation work well and in time.Last but not least important, I want to expre my wish to be a volunteer.In the first place, it is the duty of every
Chinese to do his bit for the 2008 Olympic Games.In the second place, I have a good command of foreign languages.I can
speak English, Ruian, and Japanese.Therefore I can be a qualified volunteer.I am looking forward to your reply
Sincerely Yours
Li Ming
5．A Letter of Complaint投诉信
你新买的电脑出了问题，为此你写信给经理投诉。
You have bought a brand-new computer in a store.But much to your disappointment, it could not be properly operated when you got it back.Write a letter to the manager:
1)Giving complaints，2)Describing the problems，3)And asking for some compensation.Dear manager，I write this letter to you to make some complaints about the computer I bought in your store yesterday afternoon.There’s something wrong with it.That makes me extremely unhappy.The computer cannot be properly shut down when I got it back to the office.When I click the shutdown button, it seems
that the machine gives no response.And I'm so annoyed with it.It's obvious that you didn’t' carefully examine the machine before you sold it.I think your store should take full
responsibility for selling me the defective machine.I insist that you give me a satisfactory reply.I do want you to give
back my money as soon as poible.Sincerely yours，Tom
6．A Letter of Job Application 求职信
假如你马上要毕业了，现给一个公司的人力资源经理写一封求职信。
You will graduate from university and are hunting for a job.After reading a job ads, write a letter to the Personnel
Resources Department to
1)State your reason to write the application,2)describe your relevant education background,3)Introduce your English level, and
4)State your way of contact.Dear Sir/Madam，I am responding to your ad in the June 20th, 2005, iue of the Sunday Talent Journal for the position of production
coordinator.I feel that my background in electronics and manufacturing will fit in well.I will graduate from the Beijing Science & Technology University in June with a Bachelor of Science degree in Manufacturing Engineering.I have had extensive training on computers while at school.In my Production and Inventory
cla, I have learned about computerized production and material scheduling in a job shop environment.I paed CET-6 in 2004.Not only do I pay much attention to improving my reading and listening skills, but I also keep
practicing oral English.I am looking forward to hearing from you.Would you please call me to set an interview? I can be reached at my resume
addre or by phoning(010)2357-7980 after 4 p.m.Sincerely Yours
Li Ming
7.A Notice of Lost and Found失物招领通知
你捡到了一个电子词典，为找到失主，请写一个失物招领通知
You have found an electronic dictionary and want to return it to its owner.Write a notice of Lost and Found to clearly
state:
1)The time and place of your finding
2)The feature of the dictionary
3)Your information for contact
Lost and Found
On the evening of January 4th, 2005, I found an electronic dictionary in the English reading-room on the 3rd floor of
the new library in the east district of our university.The electronic dictionary can be generally described as follows.It is brand new and metallic gray in color.What's
more, the portable electronic dictionary is as big as a piece of cake and as thin as a regular magazine.The owner of the electronic dictionary may contact me now.My room phone number and mobile phone number are(010)
62043340 and *** respectively.Please make appointment in advance.Sincerely Yours
Li Ming 8.A Letter of Appeal 呼吁信
目前环境遭到严重破坏，请写一封信呼吁大家保护环境。
Over the past years, we have witneed destructions of various kinds caused by human actions.As a university student，write a letter to our society to
1)Enumerate present severe condition,2)State the neceity of social concern, and
3)Suggest the counter-measures.To everyone on our planet，Over the past years, floods, droughts, landslides, and dust-storms have frequented our planet, the only habitat of human
beings.Several days ago, tsunami(海啸)has swept the Southeast Asia, which has caused enormous damage.All these have
sounded an alarm to human beings.The destruction which is caused by human beings has aroused people’s concern all over the world.If we pay no heed to the
present destructive human activities, our planet will become of tomb instead of cozy home.What’s more, we should realize
that only from our planet can we obtain our sheltering, food, cloth and so forth.Counter-measures must be taken to curb the destruction caused by human beings.Most importantly, laws must be established
to punish those who are involved in destructive conducts.Sincerely Yours
Li Ming
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2010年专升本作文范文（投诉信）
Dear Sir or Madam，I am writing to inform you that the TV set we ordered from your website does not work well.The TV set we ordered is Panasonic, high-definition, and 58" on the date of Sep.20th, 2010, and we
spent $ 1,100 on it.The date we received it was Sep.25th, 2010.The first two days it worked well, but
afterwards, it seemed tired.The problems are that we cannot find the right channel with the control and
sometiimes the screen is getting darker and darker.To resolve the problem, I would like you to replace it with a new one, or take it back and give us full
amount of refund.Thank you.I'm looking forward to hearing from you.2009专升本英语作文范文
I’m LiYuan, the organizer of the volunteer group in the
university.Our group was found on Dec.5, 2007.The date
is special in the world called International Volunteer
Day.By now, there are around 200 members in our group，who
are students from different departments of our
university.We work in small groups with different plans，such as taking care of aged people who are alone at home，visiting orphanage to teach them something and so on.We
take turns doing these.The purpose for us to do so is to
try to make more harmonious environment.We welcome more
people to join us to build a better world.============================= 2008专升本英语作文范文
Job Vacancy
If you are interested in working in Beijing Pioneer Hotel, we would be pleased to hear from you.Now we are looking for
managers for our enlarged hotel.People we need: One male manager for the Security Department One male or female manager for the Busine Center One male or female manager for the Accounting Department
Position requirements: Bachelor degree or above Devotion in working and highly responsibility and profeional dedication At least two-year working in hotel experience Age 25-45, healthy
Send your full details to: jobapply@beijibgpioneerhotel.com before December 12, 2009.For further information please
inquire the same email addre, we will respond as soon as poible, or phone 010-66875831.Thank you.Li Yuan(manager)Personal Department Beijing pioneer Hotel
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2003-2006 年作文范文
2003 年作文题
写信邀请朋友参加你的生日聚会。
信的内容包括：
1．告知对方聚会的具体时间，地点
2．到达聚会地点的行车路线及便利的交通工具
3．要求对方就能否参加聚会做回复
Dear Julie，Next Sunday will be my birthday.I have decided to hold a birthday party at home.If you can come I will be very
pleased.Please tell me whether you can come or not during the weekdays.Next, I want to tell you how to find my home, take bus No.101 to Bridge Street, after you get off, walk forward for
about
fifteen minutes, you will see many tall buildings by the river, I live in building No.2 room 405.I think it
is easy for you to find
my home, you won’t mi it.Yours ever，Alice
2004年作文题
英语系的钱教授要为本系学生做一个讲座。请写出一则关于这个讲座的通知，通知内容包括以下几个方面：
1．讲座的主题和主要内容。
2．讲座的时间和地点。
3．参加讲座的对象。
4．要求本专业的学生在讲座后进行一次讨论。
Writing(25 points)
Announcement
Attention please, I have something to tell you.Tomorrow morning there will be a report in our school Hall.Mr.Qian, profeor of the English Department, will
give us a talk on how to improve our oral English and how to solve problems in English education.The talk begins at nine
o’clock
tomorrow morning, and it will last for about three hours.Every teacher and student of the English
Department is expected to come
on time.Students of the English Department should have a discuion after the talk.English Department
2005年作文题
Looking for a mobile phone
Owing to my own carelene on my way back to the dormitory from the claroom yesterday evening, I had my black
Motorola mobile phone lost.I am anxiously expecting someone to report its recovery to Mr.Li Yuan at 66778899 as soon as
poible.This mobile phone is very important to me for several reasons.First, it is my birthday present from my parents who
hoped this phone would bring happine and succe in my university life and I really value this expectation.The phone
has been with me for two years and it has seen all my succees and sorrows in the past two yeas.Secondly, the phone
stores my
most important contact numbers of teachers, friends who make important contact with me through the phone.Without these numbers, my life and study will be put in a difficult situation.I sincerely hope those who have found it will contact me and return it to me soon.I will offer a material reward
to the
person who brings it back to me.Many thanks in advance.Please contact me at: 66778899 or e-mail me at: Doreen@yahoo.com.cn
Li Yuan
2006 年作文范文
Dear Harry，It was so nice to hear from you, and I was especially excited to hear your mum and dad are coming for a tour of
huangshan Mountains.They are most welcome for the tour and I would happily to be tour guide for them then.Most people now take the direct flight from Shanghai to huangshan, but of course if they would like to enjoy the
scenery
along the railway line, a train ride there would also be a comfortable overnight experience.Hotels around
Huangshan are
many and they can choose one to their liking.They don’t have to take many things with them except some change clothes, as the weather on the mountains tends to
be cool at this time of the year.They might also like to take some medicine for common colds and diarrhea, but medical
services here are definitely helpful.If they have time, they might like to go around a bit here in Shanghai, where day trips to Zhouzhuang, tongli or
even
Huangzhou may give them a taste of the representative Southern China scenery.Looking forward to their visit, and wish you a very happy spring vacation.With best regards
Li Yuan
