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• Eg3原文P119第四段
两条杀红眼的大恶狗，明白了主人的叫喊和手势，巴勒和二郎突然后退几十步，迅速改变战术，连吼几声，发了疯似地朝狼群中一条最大的头狼冲撞过去—二郎速度快，先撞上了狼，大狼被撞出三四米远，但没有撞倒，旋即站住。此时，凶猛沉重的巴勒，像一段粗大的撞城锤，砰地撞了个正着。头狼被撞的连打了两三个滚，还未等头狼站起身，二郎等不及其它的狗护卫支援，立即单刀突入狼群中心，上前一口咬住它的喉咙，咔嚓一声合拢牙口，四股狼血喷向天空雪地，喷红了二郎的头，也吓蒙了狼群。
• 译文P190 The two savage, red-eyed dogs understood both the shouts and the hand signals;they,everal steps and changed tactics.With loud roars, they made a mad dash for the biggest wolf in the pack, the leader.Erlang, the quickest, hit the wolf first, knocking him back some three or four yards;but he stayed on his feet, just in time for the fierce, heavier Bar to hit him like a sledgehammer and send him tumbling.Then, before he could get to his feet, Erlang charged and, without ground;Erlang’s red-stained face threw a fright into the pack.waiting for support, sank his teeth into the leader’s throat, sending four streams of blood skyward and onto the snowy
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I select this paragraph, which describes the fierce and harsh fighting between the pack and dogs.The description is vivid.There are many features about this paragraph.•
First of all, I will analyze the features of sentences and words.Although the paragraph is long, it involves many short sentences.From the point of the whole paragraph, the author uses many fixed expreion , gerund phrases and other simple sentences, such as with loud roars, he stayed on his feet, just in time for the fierce, , sank his teeth into the leader’s throat, sending four streams of blood skyward and onto the snowy and so on..I think this paragraph describes the fierce fighting, so this use can make fighting more vividly and densely , thus readers can feel the dense and fierce atmosphere from this paragraph.• Next , I will analyze the features of words.I especially appreciate the use of words.Some of them are direct, such as red-eyed , dash, and red-stained.Besides ,the use of complex words can make readers realize the features of items quickly.Also, some fixed impreions are vivid, such as knocking him back, backed up, threw a fright into and so on.Besides, I prefer the use of roar and blood skyward.Compared with shouting or crying ,roar can expre the strength.The adverb skyward is vivid.• Thirdly, I will describe author’s emotion.Although the description is vivid , the author emphasize the pack and hate the dogs.owing to his born surrounding , he lives with wolves.We can from this vision.When he describes the dog , he uses some paionate words, savage, red-eyed, red-stained and so on.Thus, we can conclude that he fears that the pack get injured.• Finally , I will analyze from the perspective of cultural-dimension-transfer.This fighting happens in the graland, so it fills the filling of conquer.this novel also has some era-marked words and expreions of the Cultural Revolution.Besides, as Lang Tuteng is set in the Mongolian graland, it is also rich in Mongolian-marked words and expreions.The whole paragraph is full of the feeling of fierce, which suits the graland’s features • That is my analyze..•
