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1.We college students had enough time to take a part-time job, no matter how busy we were.2.There are so many countries using English that it had been regarded as an international language.3.The eating habit of Chinese people have changed in the past decade.4.Now fruits and vegetables can be seen everywhere when it is in season.5.I can solve our problem of tuition and fees by taking some part-time jobs.6.Without television, people can’t get information that comes from other parts of the world immediately.7.At the age of six, my father began to give me English leons.8.To improve one’s writing skill, regular practice is neceary.9.With the computer, one can do shopping, banking and read at home.10.Nowadays, people not only eat enough food, but also eat better.11.Participating in sports is good for our physical health, and through it we can also train our character.12.Sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden the have to bear.13.Someone believes that the teacher’s task is to students knowledge, which may not be true.14.People have been fighting against the influence of TV commercials, but it often proves usele.15.While we reduce the number of vehicles, the speed of traffic can be increased.16.Each of us may take a part-time job to help support ourselves, but if you spend too much time on it, your study will be affected.17.TV presents us with many useful informations.18.Making our cities greener is not an easy work.19.Each people has his own opportunities.20.Book knowledge is important, but we should learn something in the society.21.When I was in the high school, I always have a beautiful picture of the college life.22.If there were no electric power, we would have to do everything by the hands.23.If there were no electric power, factory would stop producing goods, car, bus and train would stop running.24.TV now plays and important role in our daily life, Because we think it extremely important.25.There are many ways to contact with society.For example, join in clubs, take part-time jobs and help the poor.26.If no electricity, all activities such as watching TV and seeing movies will be impoible.27.Because some college students could not find a better job, so they decided to continue to read for second degree.28.Although an opportunity is rare, but we must be ready to seize it.29.We students should learn / study as much knowledge as poible.30.With a rise in he number of cars and buses, traffic in Shanghai has become more and more crowded.31.People begin to eat more vice food.32.Actually, traffic jams have effected our daily life.33.In my opinion, I believe the present educational system is in need of reform.34.The reason why people choose to live in the country is because there is no pollution nor noise there.35.After four years, we all graduated from college and entered society.36.Many college students have a strong desire to be independent on their parents.37.The computer like TV, it has both advantages and disadvantages.38.Obviously, our country would stop develop if no electricity.39.Riding bicycles conveniences my work.40.Unlike movies, TV shows on continuously, and doesn’t need to pay an extra money.41.Too easy or to difficult is no good for us.42.College students doing part-time jobs is god to his family, himself, and the whole society.43.The canteen should setup several televisions.44.Reading books can acquire knowledge.45.People think go to the movie will cost a lot of money.46.There are many people take part in sports and games now.47.There are many people complain the paper-making mill pollute our fresh water can by people use.48.Although difficulty is exist, but we can overcome it.49.We should put our heart into the study.50.We young people are now living in sugar water.51.In a society where men are heavy and women are light, women cannot enjoy full equality.52.People set off firecrackers to congratulate the red and white happy things.53.We should advocate five talks and four beauties.54.Those are my humble opinions.【错误归类及修改建议】
（一）主干性错误
时态：1，2
1.We college students we are.2.There are so many countries using English that itbeen regarded as an
international language.语态：15
15.While theof traffic should be
increased.句子成分：25，26，38，39，41，42，43，44，45，46，47，48
25.There are many ways to contact with society.For example, join in clubs,take part-time jobs, or help the poor.26.Ifno electricity, all activities,be impoible.38.Obviously, our country would stop 39.It is convenient for me to go working by bicycles.41.no good for us.42.Collegedoing part-time jobs is good to himself, his family and the whole
society.43.Several televisions should be setup in the canteen.44.45.People think going to movies will cost a lot of money.46.There are many peoplepart in sports and games now.47.There are many people complain the paper-making mill our fresh
water 48.Although difficulties exist, we can overcome them.主干搭配：30，34，40，30.With a rise in the number of cars and buses, in Shanghai 34.The reason why people choose to live in the country is that there is neither
pollution nor noise there.40.Unlike movies, TV shows on continuously, and the viewers don’t need to pay an
extra money.（二）细节性错误
代词（指代明确）：12，13，14，12.Sometimes（如此一来，句中的they就明确的指向了students）
13.Someone believes that a teacher’s task is to give students knowledge,which may not be true.（如此一来，which明确的指向前文的整句含义）
14.People have been fighting against the influence the influence of TV commercials,butoften proves usele.（it指代不明确，换成the effort便可以明确的指代前文中所言的斗争）
名词（泛指，特指）：20，21，22，23
20.It is important for us to acquire knowledge from books, but we should also learn
something from（不需要the）
21.When I was in a high school, I always had a beautiful picture of college life.22.If there were no electric power, we would have to do everything 23.If there were no electric power,would stop producing goods, buses and trains would stop running.用词（准确性）：17，18，19，29，31，32，33，35，36，37，17.TV presents us withuseful（分清可数名词和不可数名词）
18.Making our city greener is not an easy（分清抽象名词和具体名词）
19.Each（分清个体和集体概念）
29.31.32.33.We students shouldas much knowledge as poible.People begin to have more non-staple food.Actually, traffic jams have（注意区分形似词）In my opinion, the present educational system is in need of reform.（不必重复）
35.Four years , we all graduated from college and entered society.36.Many college students have a strong desire totheir children.37.Like TV, a computer has both advantages and disadvantages.修饰成分：6，7，8，6.Without a television, people cannot immediately get information that comes from
other parts of the world.7.At my age of six, I was taught English by my father.8.To improve one’s writing skill, he needs regular practice.（三）逻辑性错误
逻辑缺失：23，23.If there were no electric power,would stop producing goods,would stop running.逻辑冗余：27，28，48
27.Because some college students cannot find satisfactory jobs, they decide to
continue their schooling for second degree.28.Although opportunities are rare, we must be ready to seize them.48.Although difficulties exist, we can overcome them.逻辑不成立：24
24.TV now plays an important role in our daily life, insight into the alien world without it.（四）一致性错误
主谓一致：2，3
2.There are so many countries using English that itbeen regarded as an
international language.3.The diet of Chinese peoplechanged in the past decade.句中指代一致：4，5，16
4.Now fruits and vegetables can be seen everywhere whenin season.5.I can solveproblem of tuition and fees by taking 16.Each of us may take a part-time job to help support himself, but if he spends too
much time on it,平行结构前后一致：9，10，11，15，20
9.With a computer, one can do shopping, banking and
10.Nowadays, people have.11.Participating in sports is good for p.15.While the number of vehicles is reduced, the efficiency of traffic should be
increased.20.It is important for us to acquire knowledge from books, but we should also learn
something from.（整句前后要平行）
（五）荒谬、无聊、不可思议的错误
49，50，51，52，53，54
49.We.50.We young people are now leading a sweet life.51.In a society equality.52.Firecrackers are often set off
53.We should advocate 54.Those are my opinion.
