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两个句子之间用accordingly, besides, so, then, therefore or thus连接,则用”;”而不用”,”例如:I had never been in the place before;so I had difficulty in finding my way about.注意:少用so,因为so很容易被滥用。可以用as+句子1,句子2.如果句子很短,而且“对仗”性强,则不用分号用逗号就行。
如: Man proposes, God disposes. Make the paragraph the unit of composition
one paragraph to each topic.一句话不能单独成为一个段落(除非是过度段)
As a rule, begin each paragraph with a topic sentence;end it in conformity with the beginning
如果是议论文,则每一段的写作框架:
1.The topic sentence comes at or near the beginning
2.The succeeding sentences explain or establish or develop the statement made in the topic
sentence;and
3.The final sentence either emphasizes the thought of the topic sentence or states some important
consequence.(段落结尾偏离段落论点或者不重要得细节是大忌)
段落中支撑段首中心句的方式:
1.Restating topic sentence in other forms
2.给topic sentence当中的某些用语下定义
3.否定topic sentence的反面
4.举例子
5.Showing the implications and consequences of the topic sentence
如果段落是叙述或描写形式, 多使用主动语态
切忌使用多重被动语态
如(NG用法):Gold was not allowed to be exported.He has been proven to have been seen entering the bus..切忌使用动词的名字形式作为主语然后用被动语态
如 Mobilization of the army was rapidly carried out.Mobilization可以直接作为谓语,这里用be carried out做谓语太累赘,应该改成:The army was rapidlymobilized.对比: The export of gold was prohibited.这里用export的名字形式,是因为export没有was prohibited的意味,所以可以这样使用被动语态。
主题句一定用积极语态,不要用否定形式。
如:不要用He was not very often on time, 而应该用He usually came late.在主题句里,it’s better to如 not honest------dishonest
注意:Every word should tell and being concise is the key!
例如: The question as to whether 改成 whether the question
There is no doubt but that 改成no doubt(doubtle)
Used for fuel purposes改成used for fuel
He is a man who改成he
In a hasty manner改成hastily
This is a subject which改成this subject
His story is a strange one改成his story is strange.“the fact that”不能用!就是一个超级搓的词组
如owing to the fact that 改成since(because)
In spite of the fact that改成although
The fact that he had not succeeded改成his failure
The fact that I had arrived改成my arrival
不要一连串句子都用which, who, where, and, but, while…
对应的idea应该用相平行的句型!
如:Formerly, science was taught by the textbook method;and now it is taught by the lab method